Mark would be the first man other than my ex-husband and my gynecologist to see me naked in close to two decades. I was equal parts aroused and terrified at the thought.
Arriving at the hotel a few minutes before 8:00pm, I quickly checked my makeup in the rearview mirror before getting out of the car. I barely recognized the eyes looking back at me. Slightly dilated and wild, they seemed to be projecting my inner anxiety and arousal.
Walking straight through the elegant lobby towards the bank of elevators, I smiled as I turned a few heads, including the stuffy looking clerk behind the front desk.
Another great six sentence sunday. awesome
ReplyDeleteGreat description; nice six!
ReplyDeleteReally a great description and tense. I could feel her nerves and quivering tension. Loved it Summer:) xo
ReplyDeleteLove the tension here! Great six
ReplyDeletelove the description, excellent writing
ReplyDeleteThis is a "you go girl" moment if ever I saw one. ;)
ReplyDeleteI can totally see this scene unfolding before my mind's eye. Excellent set up and interesting plot.
ReplyDeletelovely, perfectly captured!
ReplyDeleteI love her building self confidence! :)
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done, Summer!
ReplyDeleteGreat description and how she reacts.
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